Thursday, September 9, 2010

Ten in 2010

Are you up for three more months of this challenge to write a 10-word story? I'm game, if you are!

Perhaps it's trite, but today's theme reflects the season. I say "fall," you may say "autumn." Whichever, see if you can put together the season with 9 additional words to make a story.

Fall
Saddle shoes clip-clop
as I rein in excitement.
Second grade!

My saddle shoes were always the tan/brown ones.
I begged for loafers but my feet were too skinny to keep them on.   


Now it's your turn!

(some may quibble whether clip-clop is one word or not; the hyphen is my salvation!)

5 comments:

  1. Leaves fall, apples fall, night falls too early. Welcome Autumn.

    (I love this kind of challenge, Kirby, it wakes up my brain!)

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  2. Saddle shoes were always too stiff and my mom always bought them at Red Goose (where you got a prize egg!) or at Buster Brown's. I remember thinking it was terribly unfair that boys got to wear pants and penny loafers and I had to wear saddle shoes and a dress to school. Did you know you can't do cart wheels in a dress, it isn't lady like...just ask Mrs. Wilson my 2nd grade teacher. But you can climb apple trees if no one is looking!

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  3. "In a word"

    Kirby-has-a-tricksy-way-of-counting-to-ten-for-her-fall-challenge-but-who-am-I-to question?

    (Kate--I love your piece.)

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  4. Trees release the old and turn over a new leaf.

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  5. Early September

    Cold morning
    hot, soggy sandwich
    blisters on my heels.

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